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by Anonymous06/09/16

Needs editing!

Good story but the number of spelling mistakes throughout the story unfortunately distract from it.

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by thongs12506/13/16

Great Story

That was a very good story.
I thought that you did a really great job of telling it.
Thank you very much and I hope you can continue
With more stories for us. :)

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