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by juanwildone

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Delicious Story

The way you built up to the action, the way you described what was going on, and the twist to find the "perfect product" as a result all made this a great read!

I think I'm heading to the store to get my own can of whipped cream!

Kitist02Kitist02about 8 years ago
How sweet it is!!!

Oh God, that was great! The sexual lead-in to the whipped up puns was an absolute delight. Spray us some more, please...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A fantastic new idea. Very well done conceptually and grammatically. One of the best short stores ever!

A definite 5 star tale!

Bill S.

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To all the authors I've stolen from - ya caught me red-handed - at least that's all I'll admit to having in my hand. None of these stories ever occurred - except between my ears, which I should probably go and clean now.