by juanwildone
The way you built up to the action, the way you described what was going on, and the twist to find the "perfect product" as a result all made this a great read!
I think I'm heading to the store to get my own can of whipped cream!
Oh God, that was great! The sexual lead-in to the whipped up puns was an absolute delight. Spray us some more, please...
A fantastic new idea. Very well done conceptually and grammatically. One of the best short stores ever!
A definite 5 star tale!
Bill S.