All Comments on 'Unexpected Guests'

Thought it was great. Love how you stared and loved the innocents of the entire thing. doesn't always need to be rape lol. Please more

Omg continue this its. So good

I was a little worried that bigfoot stories weren't liked too well. I'm currently working on another one, but it isn't a definite thing yet.

I could have sworn that I proof-read this story, but I found numerous errors. Just missing words. Gonna improve on that.

Omg it was so hot

This story should continue, or similar stories! Will you? Weidly erotic.

Great story! I like your writing style and think you used just the right amount of descriptions without being too wordy. Also, I got pretty wet and tingly reading it and am feeling the need to go out in the woods and see what kinda trouble I can get myself into. Thank you!

After a year, it was nice to receive some feedback on this story and know it's still being viewed from time to time. I plan on writing more, just having a rough spell with life. My mother was diagnosed with cancer and I've been supporting her in her fight. I still love Literotica and I wanna contribute more stories of the big, hairy guy. I know I'm not the greatest writer, but appreciate every kind word from you guys.

Thanks

Like your style and it was paced well. All thats missing is you having time to put together Chapter 2.

Take care of what matters most, there is always time for the Fantasy World later. Wishing you and your Mother all the best.

Munchie184

Very very good! Would love to read another part to it!