I think you're going to have to try harder if you want last place in the competition, this was a good story. :-)
Sorry but this was a very dull story.
Very good, however I think I would have used some of that hot water to warm the bath water, I hate cold showers. :)
Also, a Loving Wives story about -- hold on to your hats, campers -- a LOVING WIFE! Kinda refreshing.
So what if it wasn't wall to wall sex? Some of us like a story as well as the sex. Anyone who has read ogbashan's other stories know what to expect. I often agree with dside, but not this time. Keep on with the great writing.
The usual unique Og twist made for a fun read. My only complaint is the ending seemed flat and anti-climatic (so to speak).
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try harder!
I think you're going to have to try harder if you want last place in the competition, this was a good story. :-)
Whats the point!
Sorry but this was a very dull story.
Enjoyed your story
Very good, however I think I would have used some of that hot water to warm the bath water, I hate cold showers. :)
Cute Idea
Also, a Loving Wives story about -- hold on to your hats, campers -- a LOVING WIFE! Kinda refreshing.
I liked the story
So what if it wasn't wall to wall sex? Some of us like a story as well as the sex.
Anyone who has read ogbashan's other stories know what to expect.
I often agree with dside, but not this time.
Keep on with the great writing.
A clean, energetic story
The usual unique Og twist made for a fun read. My only complaint is the ending seemed flat and anti-climatic (so to speak).
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