Dunno really.
I guess I just felt like writing a cock jerker, without worrying about a story line.
A lot of readers skip over the story to get to the dirty bits anyway, so I thought I'd save them the trouble.
Let's just say the Devil made me do it.
The basic concept is interesting but things happen way too fast. She goes from planning to fuck the guy at the door to her son in less than a minute. If more time had been spent with characters outside of the sex scene it might have helped.
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Anonymous06/10/16
still, it's a charming vignette
of down and dirty motherfucking. The boy reacts as most all boys do when they get their first view of that hairy hole between their mother's thighs, the same hole they came out of. "What really caught my eye was the way her plump pussy lips formed a perfect camel toe. I groaned as my cock started to get stiff." The boys get hard, harder than ever before in their lives. Lucky for this young guy, despite his mother's denials, what she really wants is for her kid to take that fat young hard on of his and shove it up into her, up to his balls. Her son knows what's what, so he shoves his stiff cock up his mother's welcoming cunt, pumps away like mad, gives his mom the convulsive cum she craves, and blows his balls, shooting her full of his potent young semen. Judging from his mommy's reaction, it won't be the last time.
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Anonymous06/10/16
This was good
It's just different. People come here looking for the same old same old, so they complain when it's fresh and different. I liked the horny mum's attitude, especially. At least you don't write as if your stuff is a cheesy American soap opera.
Too fast and short to get my nut, but with an odd satisfaction, in terms of the premise of the story, this ranked higher in my list of fantasy tales rather than a more plausible one. Good job. 4 stars.
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Anonymous06/12/16
NIce!
That was straight up fun! Often the way I picture cheating happening ;)
English
So sad...
Your tales are usually much better than this pathetic effort. What happened?
To Anonymous.
Dunno really.
I guess I just felt like writing a cock jerker, without worrying about a story line.
A lot of readers skip over the story to get to the dirty bits anyway, so I thought I'd save them the trouble.
Let's just say the Devil made me do it.
suffers from a lack of build up
The basic concept is interesting but things happen way too fast. She goes from planning to fuck the guy at the door to her son in less than a minute. If more time had been spent with characters outside of the sex scene it might have helped.
still, it's a charming vignette
of down and dirty motherfucking. The boy reacts as most all boys do when they get their first view of that hairy hole between their mother's thighs, the same hole they came out of. "What really caught my eye was the way her plump pussy lips formed a perfect camel toe. I groaned as my cock started to get stiff." The boys get hard, harder than ever before in their lives. Lucky for this young guy, despite his mother's denials, what she really wants is for her kid to take that fat young hard on of his and shove it up into her, up to his balls. Her son knows what's what, so he shoves his stiff cock up his mother's welcoming cunt, pumps away like mad, gives his mom the convulsive cum she craves, and blows his balls, shooting her full of his potent young semen. Judging from his mommy's reaction, it won't be the last time.
This was good
It's just different. People come here looking for the same old same old, so they complain when it's fresh and different. I liked the horny mum's attitude, especially. At least you don't write as if your stuff is a cheesy American soap opera.
curiously different
Too fast and short to get my nut, but with an odd satisfaction, in terms of the premise of the story, this ranked higher in my list of fantasy tales rather than a more plausible one. Good job. 4 stars.
NIce!
That was straight up fun! Often the way I picture cheating happening ;)
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