All Comments on 'Dead Heat: Forged In Fire Ch. 01'

I really like the way you started this, the introduction to the characters really grabed me and sucked me in, and the hook at the end is a great attention getter. I am quite amazed and surprised that with the ammount of time I spend trolling the stories on literotica that I hadn't came across your stories sooner, lucky me, talk about finding a treasure!! *rubs hands eagerly together* Okay, moving on to the next chapter...

~Enchantedgreen~