And here I though the main story got derailed on the way.... Well, as long as the main pairing of the story, the cousins of course, stays together and mother doesn't try to break them apart I don't mind an occasional fling in the basement. If nothing else I gout a good laugh out of this one and actually look forward to the whole backstory of the caving and her discovery of ancestral kids.
It's a cool story :) ! I'd love to read the sequel, i hope soon !
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Anonymous06/12/16
Very Original and Sexy
I'm so happy that finally someone has done a role reversal because its always the son kidnapping the mother !!!!!!! And keep going as your hearts content
First off I would like to thank everyone for their comments so far. This one hasn't been doing very well so far, score wise. Which I suppose is to be expected considering the content. But either way, it's great to hear your feedback on the story.
@Anon who is unsure what to think:
Yeah, you weren't the only one who was unhappy with the straight up porno style that those last two chapters took, and looking over them, I'm not very pleased with them compared to the previous chapters. I'll keep that in mind for future chapters in the main story. Going forward, I think I'm going to adopt this plan of creating spin off stories with new people. I do have another spin off planned, so keep an eye out for that.
@NaughtyPoodle55:
No promises, but I do have the gears turning in my mind for a sequel. Hopefully soon.
@Anon talking about the role reversal:
I remember reading quite a few stories like what you are talking about. This particular story started out as just a silly daydream that just begged to be written. Stay tuned to see how the plot thickens.
"...Forcing myself on you, my only son... Such a taboo... No pun intended."
"Puns like that are always intended."
Maybe I'm blind, but, uh, where's the pun? Here's the definition of a pun: A joke exploiting the different possible meanings of a word or the fact that there are words that sound alike but have different meanings. For example: "I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. It's impossible to put down." Or, "Did you hear about the guy whose whole left side was cut off? He's all right now." THOSE are puns. So, I'll repeat my question: Where's the pun? And to paraphrase a line from The Princess Bride, "You use the word, but I don't think it means what you think it means."
Aside from the issue of calling a random sentence "a pun", I didn't find your story to be all that interesting, which is kind of disappointing since it had a lot of potential. Also, tying him to a chair was an odd choice. It would seem to make more sense to bind him, spread eagle, to a bed frame: It's more comfortable than a chair, especially when you don't know how long they'll be unconscious. You have more options for sexual positions. And if the mood struck Mom, she could even have established her dominance over her son by climbing between his spread legs and pegging him.
As I said, there was a lot of potential which you squandered.
Wow, I'm quite pleased my story attracted your attention in the first place. Your feedback will certainly help me.
As for the pun, I was referencing the original "Taboo" series of porn movies. More specifically the first one.
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Anonymous06/15/16
I like incest stories and everything but the cheating part always kills it for me
There is just something about the fact that a mother and son would go behind the back of the father/husband like this just so damn easily that makes me go flaccid. It is just annoying. I always want the father to find out and then leave, and take everything with him. Some people find it hot when he decides to join in. At that point I think "welp this story just went to shit". When he starts getting ntr'd by his wife and son I get pissed off. How does someone get off on the humiliation!? The only fantasy (not erotic fantasy mind you I mean action horror fantasy) I would get at that moment would be killing the 2 of them for doing such a thing. This is well written and all but cheating just ruins it me. Were she just a divorced whore or widowed slut instead of a married sack of loose trash then I'd be up an at 'em, but she is as I said soooooo yeah.
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Anonymous06/18/16
I expect son as oral slave
The mother reads like a domme. The son reads like a reluctant slave or incestous deviant. With time I expect him to develop into a willing subject for the mother's desires. Throw in some kinky toys and mother's friends; and we have the makings of a gigolo.
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Anonymous07/09/16
awfull
Well I've read the first two identical entries and they are both terrible also identical in every way . A very poor story very poorly writen and reads like a copy and paste taken from somewhere else as I am very sure I have read exactly the same rubish elseshere. 0 stars
English
Not sure what to think
And here I though the main story got derailed on the way.... Well, as long as the main pairing of the story, the cousins of course, stays together and mother doesn't try to break them apart I don't mind an occasional fling in the basement. If nothing else I gout a good laugh out of this one and actually look forward to the whole backstory of the caving and her discovery of ancestral kids.
No more than 4* though.
Cool !
It's a cool story :) ! I'd love to read the sequel, i hope soon !
Very Original and Sexy
I'm so happy that finally someone has done a role reversal because its always the son kidnapping the mother !!!!!!! And keep going as your hearts content
Thanks for your feedback.
First off I would like to thank everyone for their comments so far. This one hasn't been doing very well so far, score wise. Which I suppose is to be expected considering the content. But either way, it's great to hear your feedback on the story.
@Anon who is unsure what to think:
Yeah, you weren't the only one who was unhappy with the straight up porno style that those last two chapters took, and looking over them, I'm not very pleased with them compared to the previous chapters. I'll keep that in mind for future chapters in the main story. Going forward, I think I'm going to adopt this plan of creating spin off stories with new people. I do have another spin off planned, so keep an eye out for that.
@NaughtyPoodle55:
No promises, but I do have the gears turning in my mind for a sequel. Hopefully soon.
@Anon talking about the role reversal:
I remember reading quite a few stories like what you are talking about. This particular story started out as just a silly daydream that just begged to be written. Stay tuned to see how the plot thickens.
Pun? What pun?
"...Forcing myself on you, my only son... Such a taboo... No pun intended."
"Puns like that are always intended."
Maybe I'm blind, but, uh, where's the pun? Here's the definition of a pun: A joke exploiting the different possible meanings of a word or the fact that there are words that sound alike but have different meanings. For example: "I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. It's impossible to put down." Or, "Did you hear about the guy whose whole left side was cut off? He's all right now." THOSE are puns. So, I'll repeat my question: Where's the pun? And to paraphrase a line from The Princess Bride, "You use the word, but I don't think it means what you think it means."
Aside from the issue of calling a random sentence "a pun", I didn't find your story to be all that interesting, which is kind of disappointing since it had a lot of potential. Also, tying him to a chair was an odd choice. It would seem to make more sense to bind him, spread eagle, to a bed frame: It's more comfortable than a chair, especially when you don't know how long they'll be unconscious. You have more options for sexual positions. And if the mood struck Mom, she could even have established her dominance over her son by climbing between his spread legs and pegging him.
As I said, there was a lot of potential which you squandered.
@Epiphany_Jones
Wow, I'm quite pleased my story attracted your attention in the first place. Your feedback will certainly help me.
As for the pun, I was referencing the original "Taboo" series of porn movies. More specifically the first one.
I like incest stories and everything but the cheating part always kills it for me
There is just something about the fact that a mother and son would go behind the back of the father/husband like this just so damn easily that makes me go flaccid. It is just annoying. I always want the father to find out and then leave, and take everything with him. Some people find it hot when he decides to join in. At that point I think "welp this story just went to shit". When he starts getting ntr'd by his wife and son I get pissed off. How does someone get off on the humiliation!? The only fantasy (not erotic fantasy mind you I mean action horror fantasy) I would get at that moment would be killing the 2 of them for doing such a thing. This is well written and all but cheating just ruins it me. Were she just a divorced whore or widowed slut instead of a married sack of loose trash then I'd be up an at 'em, but she is as I said soooooo yeah.
I expect son as oral slave
The mother reads like a domme. The son reads like a reluctant slave or incestous deviant. With time I expect him to develop into a willing subject for the mother's desires. Throw in some kinky toys and mother's friends; and we have the makings of a gigolo.
awfull
Well I've read the first two identical entries and they are both terrible also identical in every way . A very poor story very poorly writen and reads like a copy and paste taken from somewhere else as I am very sure I have read exactly the same rubish elseshere. 0 stars
Terrible
This isn't incest. Its cheating and rape. No more.
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