will there be more
Good content, but the writing is careless. You mis-wrote Rita's name once and there are other lapses. After writing a story, set it aside for at least a week and then read it carefully. You should catch most of the goofs.
A wildy enthusiastic mom is so good to find. Nice story. Keep it going
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will there be more
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Good content, but the writing is careless. You mis-wrote Rita's name once and there are other lapses. After writing a story, set it aside for at least a week and then read it carefully. You should catch most of the goofs.
Moms right
A wildy enthusiastic mom is so good to find.
Nice story.
Keep it going
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