All Comments on 'Sarah Gets a Visit'

Would love to pull that nice pink thong of yours off and 69 you till you cum and then fivk your ass. Love the photo of you. Hotkiwimale

Should have been fuck instead of fivk

Nice job, Sarah. While these types of stories are generally not my favorite, I thought you handled it well, made it hot, and written well. ;)

Well, the writing is good from a technical point. But I couldn't get into the story after the first few paragraphs - too much suspension of belief. A software program like what the blackmailer describes is not physically possible.

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hi Sarah! Nice story. I kinda felt bad for you in the end. Dunno if that was the reaction you wanted from the readers.

In any case, just wanted to point out that you got confused with the names at the end of the story. At least two times, you have typed Mark instead of John. Do take a look and edit it if you want to.

I hope things get better for Sarah in the next part of the story..

Ciao.

I liked these stories a lot and was hoping there would be more. Do you think you will continue them?

Great story, have Mark back with a couple of buddies for a great evening!