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by Maria239404/01/04

such images

fantastic, reminiscent of long lost dreams
( and such)
I wish I could take a bath
in your beautiful mind
and scrub my face and feet
with all your tingly words

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by SeattleRain04/01/04

perfect

down to the waffle stomper woman. Accessable, visual, visceral. Perfect.

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