Give me a break. It's just a short flash story. Not real. Pure fantasy. You comment on this like it's real. I tell you what, you write a story under a thousand words and incorporate characters, plot, conclusion and twist. This is exactly why I hardly ever post on literotica. Ridiculous criticisms about the morality of a sex story. Idiots.
Great little story
with a fantastic surprise ending. 5*
Come on it's just a fantasy story.
Give me a break. It's just a short flash story. Not real. Pure fantasy. You comment on this like it's real. I tell you what, you write a story under a thousand words and incorporate characters, plot, conclusion and twist. This is exactly why I hardly ever post on literotica. Ridiculous criticisms about the morality of a sex story. Idiots.
An amusing flash story
Good job.
Anon will hate it, though.
I Love A Good Flash*****
Thanks for sharing this damn good story!!
Nicely done......
Just as good as I remember, great detail for a flash piece
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