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Hampered in His Plans Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/13/16

Tedious?

Not that shocking of an ending. Seems like a lot of space describing the look of medals and uniforms. It didn't feel like a lot of progress in this installment. I'm still disappointed that Amy needed to die.

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by weatherman7006/13/16

think I figured out who Sinon is.

I believe Detective Julie Newton is Sinon.

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by WifeWatchman06/13/16

To "Tedious?"

The overall series is a procedural, so yeah, you'll get a few mundane stories. A lot of this chapter was wrapping up of odds and ends, and also setting the table for the future. Ch. 5 was going to be the last chapter, but I split it because I needed to put in some things; ergo, this Ch. 6 was a bit tedious. Speaking of the medals and such: almost everything I write about has some meaning at some point in time... hmmmm.....

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by tranzmany06/13/16

The Sinon Guess

I agree with that guess and have been waiting for Newton to be revealed as the motorcycle rider from the black badges case. I think she over played her hand going into interrogation this time. Even if she is not Sinon it seems obvious she is working for the consultant like when she was first working for Malone.

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by Anonymous06/15/16

Inconclusive ending, this time. Well, all for the greater good of the series I guess.
Hehehe.

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by Anonymous06/20/16

New story

Awesome final twist, just wondering when the follow up story will be published?

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by covenant_man06/27/16

Sinon

I zeroed on on Julie Newman as Sinon a couple of stories back, and with every clue that comes out, the more convinced I am of it. And I agree with the idea she is also the mysterious motorcycle rider we've seen a few times. Can't wait to find out if we're right!

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