All Comments on 'The Seduction of Shasa Ch. 02'

The story was fabulous. A very well written story of reluctance and final acceptance, even enjoyment on the girls part. The only, and this is a minor point, that distracted from the story, were a very few spelling errors. The words that you meant to use were obvious, but you might want to have a second pair of eyes proofread it, no one can catch all of there own mistakes. It was an extraordinary story, and I cant wait to read more. BRAVO

he should take her cherry and fill her full of cum

I love this story! I love stories of bondage, force, and reluctance. This made me so horny! I didn't have to use my own creativity, nor did I have to think. Please write more!!!!

Omg that was so hot. have him tied her up and take her. please right more or have her begging him to take her. Keep more comming

I agree with

mpregnate her.........

04/06/04 by Anonymous

he should take her cherry and fill her full of cum

knock the bitch up with his incest baby