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A Bridge Between Worlds Ch. 08

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by ReiDeBastos06/13/16

Someone has to say it...

Very well done!

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by Anonymous06/14/16

Awesome!

Much much more than just a stroke story. You have brought the characters to life. I find myself itching for the next chapter. You rock dude!

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by Anonymous06/15/16

Well done.

That was a great job you did with this chapter. It showed a great deal of possibilities for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

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by auguy8606/21/16

Thanks for the kind comments

Glad to see that this chapter has gone over so well! I worked very hard on the rapidly changing perspectives in this segment, as you can tell, and it seems to have been well received. I am a little over halfway through the next chapter, should have it done near the end of the week.

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