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Potent all around
Wow, this was a chapter full of stuff to take in. The birthday present delivered a day early surely put Mark in some heavenly mood, the surprise visit form his family might have dented the mood for the young couple but nothing that good food can't fix, Freds trading and show of pure good will was somewhat unexpected but will surely be appreciated when the time comes, the final debate however makes me shiver of impeding trouble. I just hope Jenny got the message and won't press for Marks dad to come, they are too cute to have a fight over such petty reason (she has to understand there are some thing people don't want to deal in life).
This was yet another superb chapter in an already great series.
5* of course.
P.S. If your creative slumps over this series make you write stuff like your other stories then it might not be a bad thing to have some more in the future :)
The "creative slump" . . .
. . . came when the telephone rang: I knew that I wanted to add Mark's family there, but it wasn't working out well in my mind. The love scenes prior to that part had been written days ago.
The Cabin story has actually been written for weeks. I started it as a potential romance magazine submission, you know, for actual money, but I didn't get the length right. They are looking for 15,000 or more words, and The Cabin is 9,150 words long.
The first seven chapters here have been edited to make one long magazine submission, and that came to 48,000 words. I may have to delete the series from Literotica, eventually, if it gets accepted for publication. If I put the whole thing together, editing everything, I'd be at over 100,000 words, and now we're talking a novel.
Hope it works for 'ya
I'm really hopping you make it a success with the publication, be it as a magazine submission or full-on publication as a book. Even if that means you'll have to delta it from LE. Heck if you make it an e-book I'll probably buy it.
There are quite a few authors here on LE that publish or have published real book for a living or side job, so you might want to scour the forum (aka. the bulletin board) for some friendly advice in case you can't decide what or how to do it.
I love them both
Oh the usual ups and downs. Jennifer would be wise to talk to Mark about his father, then respect his wishes and decision, and I'm sure in their sharing, Mark can tell her the whys and wherefores. The lovemaking for his 19th birthday was wonderful. Love his chest hair and her playing with it. Makes them both sexy. Please keep them together, and loving each other, and growing in that love together! Would love to see them as they continue over the years!
Uh,Uh! First secret...!
What happens to the father of Mark? What is the secret of his abandonment of the family?
I think this is the first secret without revealing this story.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
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