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by Anonymous

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by Maria239404/05/04

good imagery

but the last line hurt your position, drop it, have faith in your ability without the ellipses, ok? :rose:

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by Tathagata04/06/04

This reminds

me of a song called " Endless Sleep" for some reason.
I love this...
great imagery..and I like the last two lines only because it seems to bring it all back to the dreamlike hopelessness of it all.
( maria you can spank me later)
Thank you for this
very well done

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by duddle14602/04/07

sensual

Your presence sails the watery depths of my very being ~ I am adrift waiting to be rescued.

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