...and beautiful. I particularly liked the aliteration in the fourth verse.
Shame about the CapsLock. :)
everything that's ever been said still lingers in the air still....so does love
It is the scent that you can smell and you can not smell simultaneously. Very nice.
Now if you could just take out, "withering wilted," the piece would be perfect.
Like the smell of faded roses ~ who can escape the love you can't forget.
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