Trapped

I suppose it had to happen one day

I have read everything you have on literotica.
I liked them all, especially the Red silk series.
The Energy saving story was enjoyable but a bit muddled.
Now this one, which does absolutely nothing for me.
It is a load of crap for a woman to react the way your story shows her.
At least your other stories were believable.

Weird...

Interesting in a very weird sort of way. But it all came from absolutely no where. The man's insistence on sex was boorish, but there is nothing in the story to suggest his wife would retaliate in such a bizarre way. The offense might merit a cold shoulder and a week of abstinence...tops.

And what's with all the nylon? Again nothing in the story suggested the wife had a nylon fetish.

Weird...I continued reading only because it was so weird I thought it might be explained. It wasn't. It just continued to be weird.

In most cases like this, the author has some scene they want to write out, but they are too unmotivated or too lazy to spend the time setting the scene up. I've been guilty of it myself.

Eric

What was that shit?

For one thing, the obvious category for this was Fetish.

Secondly, while he was an ass, despite what she said, she was the one who was acting like a child, throwing the equilvalent of a temper tantrum.

I have to agree with Atlanta

Seems like oggy had this great idea of someone being sewn into pantyhose and just had to write it.
Shame he didn't bother taking some time to do it.
This is merely a scene dropped into an unbelievable situation.
Maybe it was a good idea if used in the correct scenario - we will never know now, will we??

Why?

Why is it that men are expected to put out on demand, but we are blamed for seeking reciprocation?

yuk

When he dies from suffocation, she has the perfect defense, "He persuaded me to have sex when I didn't want to, and it wasn't very good." Not guilty.

Stupid

Now who was the child? Why would anyone write this kind of garbage? At least there wasn't any cheating in it, but I would guess that when he is sober he is a subserviant wimp.

a piece of crap

That husband should have kicked the crap out of her then divorced her for brutality against him .
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.

things change

i would never vote zero here or give a 1. until about a year ago.but some of the stories now are so weird,so bad, it's just not possible to vote any other score.as you've just proven.

Casting Stones

Let me start by saying, I don't have the ability to verbalize, nor organize my thoughts in a way to create even a half way decent story. I just don't have that gift. What gets me is the way some people are so harsh in their critizism of someone like Ogg and a lot of other authors on this site. When you check the bios and stories of these "critics" you find a lot of them haven't authored even one story. How many has Ogg produced and/or shared?

It's like me standing outside a golf course, watching ameturs playing golf and when they hit a shot I don't think was up to my standards I let out a tirade of insults about they aren't giving 100% and they must be getting lazy. Especially if I don't play myself.

Everyone has a talent and the authors on this website aren't in it for the money. I appreciate the effort all the authors give, while opening themselves up to our "CRITIC/EXPERTS" rath.

I thank Ogg and all the other authors who've given me hours of enjoyment through their personal work. Keep it up. The vast majority of people who visit and enjoy this site really do appreciate all your efforts.

Thanks Ogg,

Bob

PS: The only reason this is "by Anonymous" is I don't remember the username I sign up with.

Unduly Criticised

Wow...so much vitriol. I think this storey would have fared better in a category other than loving wives. Really don't think this yarn deserves such harsh criticism.

I found the premise quite interesting and different to anything I've read previous, for that I commend it, I really quite liked it. Bravo Ogg! Pay no heed to the tiny-brained ones!

Rape is an act of violence and normally illegal

You pointed out that he did not force himself on her. However the same cannot be said about her. I didn't like it as it was an over-the-top response and the alleged original lack of respect was compounded many times by the wife.
Husband should quietly pack his bags and disappear, what would she do if he really showed a lack of respect in public? I would be afraid to go to sleep in any room or building where she had access.

Overkill

He was a drunk fool. She told him to go ahead and get it over with and he did. His crime? Insensitive while being horny. He apologized immediately after.

She on the other hand is sadistic and brutal and insanely angry over such a matter. What did she prove? That she overcame him? No, he surrendered to her because he wanted to make amends for his behavior and trusted her. His mistake. No trust for that shrew ever again. She used force, now he can. Throw her clothes in her suitcase and throw her and them OUT the door. Call the lawyer in the morning and get the proceedings going.

1) it's just a story; it's not real

2) it illustrates how some women don't want sex 24/7, and neither do men (to and past the point that they're sore and unable to enjoy it)
3) there may be a trust issue but again, it's just a story and also I think he realised that she was just demonstrating a point; "it was just sex" is what he would have said, and so can she now. Surely he enjoyed it? I can't see a lot of love lost though he could have expressed a least a LITTLE bit of anger at the end
4) that said I don't condone either of their behaviour.

MMMMMMMM

I guess that he was a real wimp to take that from his wife . Maybe he should be looking for womabn that really is a woman .

Wow, you have threatened some peeps gender roles!

Congrats to you! As for character development, I could see myself (female) being just as pissed at him and it would be very cathartic for me to act out on it. Nuf' said for your fem.

Oops! Wrong Category

Apologies to the readers. I should have submitted this in the Fetish category where it might have been appreciated by those who like playing with pantyhose and nylon.

It wasn't right in the category I chose.

great fetish story

The only problem with it, is that her punishment would be a reward in my eyes :)

Thanks Ogg for pointing this story out.

Weird***

Thanks for sharing. I would never touch her again!! One of us would have to move.

A WHIPPED DOG SHOWS MORE COMPASSION

than a wimpy cucky whipped, TK U MLJ LV NV

theres an old English song about a drunken husband always forcing himself onto his wife then him sleeping it off.
Then one night after a session like that, and him in his drunken stuper, she sowed him into a blanket and then beat him black and blue with a frying pan, he swore he would beat her! She said you might but the next time you come home drunk you will get the same treatment. the song from Yorkshire's called "wrapped up in a blanket"

Comments edited years later.

I had left all the abusive and racist comments on this story for nearly ten years. I have now deleted some of the worst.

My real mistake was putting the story in the wrong category. It should have been it fetish. Some people seem to react badly to any suggestion that a woman can overreact to a husband's insensitivity. They think that it is OK for a man to be an arsehole, but a woman can't be unless she is punished for it. If you are that threatened by a fictional story, don't read it!

So he didn't rape her?

Just had some drunken sex that was lousy. And she decides to punish him? In the first place, had she pushed her tights that far into his mouth and tied them there he would have died. It's called a "gag reflex". He would have vomited and since his mouth was blocked, he would have swallowed the vomit into his lungs - literally drowning in his own vomit. She wouldn't have been able to do anything but watch him die. Then she could have spent the rest of her life in prison. And at the end? The lesson he learned is that he could never spend another night in a house with her. He would have packed and left as soon as possible. While I like some of your stories one of the things I don't like about them is that a lot of the men seem to acquiesce to the women's actions with no thought to either retaliation or revenge. How about some men with some backbone or some smarts? Mike should have left her and divorced her. There's simply no way to stay with a woman as crazy as she was. Maybe another chapter to dump her? Where is FTDS when you need him?

Read a couple of your current stories and went back to some old ones

I read this and then read the comments, including the authors comment. I don't see this as a "fetish" story as neither of them are abnormally or obsessively preoccupied with the nylons. She wasn't raped. You made that clear in the story. So she is just angry with his actions. You can't put this in Non-con since he agrees to her actions with the nylons and at one point enjoys the "feel" of the nylon. And she sure isn't a "loving wife". So it really fits nowhere except maybe "Non-erotic". Because she is angry and is trying to teach him a lesson of what - respect? She has the pussy and she wants absolute control? After she demeans and humiliates him I feel he'd be seeking a divorce and moving out of the house the next day. How could he ever sleep in a room or even a house that he didn't feel safe in? If she could do this to him while he was awake what might she do when he was asleep? I've now read several of your stories and it's been hit and miss. You show a tendency towards mild mannered, weak men that seem to give into women abusing (The Bridemaid's Revenge, for example) them and doing nothing in response. And while it's fiction and you could have the Thames run green, the cowardice of your male characters gets old and not very entertaining. Thanks for the effort.