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Great start!
I think you have a great set-up. Nice dream sequence that ALMOST came true. I can't wait for the second installment!
Good Story
Great job can't wait to read more!5
Keep going
Great possibility on this story, you've left lots of story lines and plots that can happen. It could be a really good read, don't stop!
Part 2
Hi Rheyn - I really enjoyed this story, but to use a musical analogy it ends on an imperfect cadence; everything about the chord/ending says that the tune/story wants to move on rather than finish there :-)
I know you've been busy with Amy, but do you have plans to return to Eric, Melody and Mrs Rose someday soon? Thx
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Hey! Ty for the comment, means a lot to me! I have been toying at the idea of revisiting one of my other stories since I just finished Amy's forth chapter. With your comment I may do just that with Eric's internship!
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