My Daddy, My Pimp Ch. 01: Introductions

Enjoying it a great deal, just ended a bit suddenly. I want more!

Thanks for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed the story. I promise there will be more!

Saw this on the forum. Nice story and definitely something to develope. Id say continue this. Not my thing but very well written and pretty sexy for some ;) the cliffhanger is over used, but used very well in this story. 4/5

Decent

I liked this story. It was very well written. If would have been better if it were longer though. It felt like it was just getting started and then it was over. Also, and I hope you have already thought of this, I want to see the father fuck his daughter before it is over. If he is going to pimp her out, he should get to sample the goods.

Amazing

So hot!

so filthy and hot, i came... can't wait for the next one

Great story

Great story and extremely hot.

Would like to hear more.

Also the story would do better being a bit longer. It was great but then seemed to end very abruptly.

Waiting on part 2

Eagerly awaiting the next part of the story

That was great

I really enjoyed your story, very powerful

More

Pls continue great story so far can't wait to hear more of Helen getting used like a dirty whore

Excellent story and writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.