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IN THE BARTER BUSINESS
coin of the realm has no value, TK U MLJ LV NV
Crap
I'm sorry but this story is shit. Badly written and rambling. Please read your work before submitting it. If you can't be bothered to read it, why should we? It's full of childish mistakes in spelling and grammar.
And garbage like "large seventy two foot sailboat". Is there such as thing as a "small seventy two foot sailboat"?
Then the whole two scenarios are unbelievable. As in I can't believe them. Obviously confused fantasy.
You can't write. Sorry.
The Corprate Detective
I thoroughly enjoyed this read. I checked it on windows 10 spell check to find "0" errors, and yes there in a small 72' and even a medium 72' sailboat because the SM, MED and LG is predicated on the width of the vessel's beam. Any anonymous spelling professor like the poppas ass grammar teacher would know that. Thank you Peter, your story made me wet and my hubby hard. Keep it up.
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