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Kindred Strangers - Scene 02

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by Tathagata04/07/04

Yummy

love the structure and the picture it creates
Really well done
very visual and aural. I could see and hear it perfectly
a poem for a voyeur written by an exhibitionist
perfect
: )
Thank you for the peek

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by DrawnToLife09/23/11

Really Hot Yet Sentimental.

You set a good scene, and then here, wow! You got to the point!*l*
Yet it was also beautiful. I like your similes, personally, and your style made me feel emotions, not just lust and a thrill, so it was bittersweet to read - and that made it all the sweeter.
You started something beautiful here. I hope you'll return to write some more on this site? All the best :)

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