All Comments on 'Kindred Strangers - Scene 02'

love the structure and the picture it creates

Really well done

very visual and aural. I could see and hear it perfectly

a poem for a voyeur written by an exhibitionist

perfect

: )

Thank you for the peek

You set a good scene, and then here, wow! You got to the point!*l*

Yet it was also beautiful. I like your similes, personally, and your style made me feel emotions, not just lust and a thrill, so it was bittersweet to read - and that made it all the sweeter.

You started something beautiful here. I hope you'll return to write some more on this site? All the best :)