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there's erotica......
...and there's porn. This isn't erotic. Sorry.
says who
one man's erotica is another man's bible...youre on a porn site, why are you surprised at what you read?
keep on writing, sb!!!
It's always the Anon's
who criticize and yet wont admit to who they are.
I was always brought up if didn't like something say nothing...if you opened your mouth you'd better be prepared to show you could do better.
I loved it
I thought it very erotic and I love the use of " honey"
As for the last 2 lines...yes...that's exactly the feeling.
Well done
: )
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