All Comments on 'Jamie's Descent Pt. 01'

Very promising beginning though I have to admit i was hoping Vanessa had a real cock between her legs. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Is it possible to use a different name than Jamie as I often confuse it with cockatoo? No worries if you won't. Love your work <3

This, I'm guessing, is the same series you published back in 2004 on Fictionmania? Has it been updated or same story series?

the transition from the email to the blackmail wasn't very smooth for me, I know a great writer like you could have done much better. I am loving the idea tho. yummy