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by jthserra04/06/04

I think this is your best one of the night

It is well focused with some excellent phrasing. You'll want to add an apostrophe to everythings in the fifth stanza. All in all a good poem.

jim : )

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by Syndra Lynn04/06/04

Wow

there but for the grace of Goddess go I. Damn that's harsh. I like it.

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