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by Linbido04/05/04

Beautiful

What a, dare I say, eclectic phrasing you manage to weave sometimes. A delight to read.

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by jthserra04/05/04

Some excellent phrasing here...

but I wondered about the contraction on whispered and then later on heavings. Very different, very good...

jim : )

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