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by Anonymous

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by jthserra04/09/04

Hey, this one has some

possibility... I'll email you with some recommendations. with the light verse, the rhyme here will work, I think just work on the flow a bit.

jim : )

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by LeBroz08/07/05

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a little thong,
and long legs strong;
I surrender ~ let me please you.

What idiot ever said they were weaker?

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by duddle14612/26/06

Questions.

A portrait of a little red devil ignites the imagination factor even before you read this poem. A girl in a thong ~ a tough temptation to resist. Well Crafted.

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by tazz31704/22/12

THE TASMANIAN IN US ALL (males)

is an atavistic inheritance. TK U MLJ LV NV

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