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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Hey, this one has some

possibility... I'll email you with some recommendations. with the light verse, the rhyme here will work, I think just work on the flow a bit.

jim : )

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

a little thong,

and long legs strong;

I surrender ~ let me please you.

What idiot ever said they were weaker?

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Questions.

A portrait of a little red devil ignites the imagination factor even before you read this poem. A girl in a thong ~ a tough temptation to resist. Well Crafted.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE TASMANIAN IN US ALL (males)

is an atavistic inheritance. TK U MLJ LV NV

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