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Fun Read
Not the "hottest" story - but it had some of that, and at the same time it was very well written and enjoyable! Not all stories have to be all "hot and bothered" - this had a bit of that, but I also enjoyed the situations Jay found himself in and the twists the story took! Well done!
Very entertaining story
Most of the stories here are very predictable. Yours had surprises. Good Job!
Needs a touch of editing.. But very enjoyable
Add more humorous dialog and you'll have yourself a winner... Jay should have been fuming as he walked down the hill.. A jock crying? Just from a warm walk in a trash bag?
Good story with intesting twists
Enjoyable and just the right length. Loved the variety of sex. A Jock dancing in a gay bar was a nice touch. Almost getting it on with coaches wife and almost getting caught... loved that, too.
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