All Comments on 'One April Evening'

I liked this one. I liked the language and imagery, which was fresh and descriptive and very lyrical. A lot of originality here, and a passion that really comes through. A simple story but told with a lot of heat and love.

Thank you, dr_mabeuse, for your compliments. I do write with passion... I am pleased that my raw emotion flows from my fingers to the keyboard and expresses what I feel. I appreciate your rating. *smiles*... and so will my Master.

Respectfully,

delphique

All I could think about reading this... was all the times that I displeased a Master in the past. I guess it just rereminded me that I wasn't good enough.

However, I did enjoy it. Your words flowed nicely and I was impressed. I hope to read more from you.

Always, E

Dearest E,

Actually, my Master is a very fine man, who takes very good Dominant care of me without the use of disciplinary measures. He possesses me completely, and I am a fortunate woman, indeed. Thank you for your kind compliments about my word weaving, though the content lacked its entire pleasure for you.

In sincerity,

delphique

I love it! It's a wonderful story! You're wonderful!

I love how sensual and romantic it is! I love your stories!