I liked this one. I liked the language and imagery, which was fresh and descriptive and very lyrical. A lot of originality here, and a passion that really comes through. A simple story but told with a lot of heat and love.
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Anonymous04/12/04
Hot and lyrical...
Thank you, dr_mabeuse, for your compliments. I do write with passion... I am pleased that my raw emotion flows from my fingers to the keyboard and expresses what I feel. I appreciate your rating. *smiles*... and so will my Master.
Respectfully,
delphique
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04/14/04
Hmm
All I could think about reading this... was all the times that I displeased a Master in the past. I guess it just rereminded me that I wasn't good enough.
However, I did enjoy it. Your words flowed nicely and I was impressed. I hope to read more from you.
Dearest E,
Actually, my Master is a very fine man, who takes very good Dominant care of me without the use of disciplinary measures. He possesses me completely, and I am a fortunate woman, indeed. Thank you for your kind compliments about my word weaving, though the content lacked its entire pleasure for you.
In sincerity,
delphique
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Anonymous11/24/08
Sensual and sweet!
I love it! It's a wonderful story! You're wonderful!
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Anonymous11/24/08
It's so wonderful this story!
I love how sensual and romantic it is! I love your stories!
English
Hot and lyrical
I liked this one. I liked the language and imagery, which was fresh and descriptive and very lyrical. A lot of originality here, and a passion that really comes through. A simple story but told with a lot of heat and love.
Hot and lyrical...
Thank you, dr_mabeuse, for your compliments. I do write with passion... I am pleased that my raw emotion flows from my fingers to the keyboard and expresses what I feel. I appreciate your rating. *smiles*... and so will my Master.
Respectfully,
delphique
Hmm
All I could think about reading this... was all the times that I displeased a Master in the past. I guess it just rereminded me that I wasn't good enough.
However, I did enjoy it. Your words flowed nicely and I was impressed. I hope to read more from you.
Always, E
Thank you, E, for your compliment of my words.
Dearest E,
Actually, my Master is a very fine man, who takes very good Dominant care of me without the use of disciplinary measures. He possesses me completely, and I am a fortunate woman, indeed. Thank you for your kind compliments about my word weaving, though the content lacked its entire pleasure for you.
In sincerity,
delphique
Sensual and sweet!
I love it! It's a wonderful story! You're wonderful!
It's so wonderful this story!
I love how sensual and romantic it is! I love your stories!
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