All Comments on 'for dear Polly'

...of remembered love, perhaps first - tentative explorations. Whatever its source, the stream of thought is chrystal clear and beautiful.

an odd, tenative feeling in the words, almost a dialect that adds an interest to the overall feeling. Good work...

jim : )

life saving limbs

finger traced kisses on air

lunch box poems

full moons

with a name of their own...

polly loves someone

a lot like you

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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This is beyond believable that such a fantastic piece of art, a true gem has not received due notice. Please, if you appreciate any poetry at all, try and read this. So much said with so much lyrical and subtle observations, at the same time you have humor and color and imagination, stop me or I'll continue forever...

And again, thank you LeBroz so much for the selection.

I must have read a different poem than the others. To me, this whatever-it-is is put together very clumsily using a cadence that is forced and inappropriate throughout. Regretfully, it just isn’t good at all.