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In a World of Black and White Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by duke955506/21/16

We win you win

we all win 5 stars

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by PenPal200106/21/16

Chapter 3 please!

Superbly written. 5 stars. Would love to read more about Embler returning stateside to find his wife a different woman. Pregnant maybe, with a tattoo or two?

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by AnnetteBishop06/22/16

Great 5 star job, excellent

Love the story, made me absolutely fucking wetttt. Can't wait to read more of your writing. xoxoxoxoAnnette

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by 1954hall06/22/16

Great story

I can see the situation like this developing. It is so dangerous exposing the woman you love to an experience that is more than you can provide but it draws you in. It is so hot thinking about her loving it so much she realizes that she will let it happen again. And you have the sick excited feeling of wanting to see her lose control and desire black dick so much she is easy white pussy for nasty hung men to enjoy. One day you wake up after watching her being fucked so good and realize he hasn't gone home. The bed is shaking as she sucks his big dick for him as he tells her that he's going to enjoy coming over whenever she wants some of his nigger dick and she cums from hearing him say that as her mouth is sliding up and down on him. Then he feeds her as you lay beside her and watch.

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by arrowglass06/22/16

What a story!

I really enjoyed where this is going...hope there is a Ch. 03!!!!

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by Rockyderek_ca06/22/16

4

Good, but no need for the stereotypical racist behaviours. And whats that at the end, she's suggesting a kid by one of the fucks .... thats way too beyond a military guys tolerance.

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by boredone3106/24/16

So good! Don't stop!!

Please, please continue this series. I'd love to see it brought to it's ultimate conclusion, but not too fast. I love how hot the build up is.

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by Tigersman06/28/16

Smoking hot

This story was every bit as good as the first chapter. I can hardly wait to see Alicia go off of birth control so she can have a black man lay his baby on her white belly like she so very badly wants.

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by Gadolfsson07/01/16

Great work. I have read both chapters and all I can say is that this is great. The story flows naturally and realistically, the characters feel natural as do their actions and thoughts. And of course the sex scenes are hot! Well done. I will be looking forward to more with anticipation.

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by willshe211/07/16

More please!

As other readers have commented, I'd really like to see these stories develop as feel the story is far from over. The characters of Brad and Alicia are so strong.
I think it could be interesting if we could see Brad's army career over, with him at home no longer with career and Alicia now the bread winner and becoming more confident. To develop the theme of them trying to close Pandora's box....but failing. For Brad to no longer be in control of situation and instead to see Alicia more prone to her addiction finding fulfilment with different black guys and Brad realising that he is true cuckold but finding pleasure in this. Alicia acts/dresses more slutty and willingly becomes pregnant. Sure you can do better than me!!!

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by knickerlover1312/07/16

hot

great story , more please. another wife becomes a black cock slut and wants to be blackbred. well written story.

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