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Dominion Ch. 03

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by Anonymous06/26/16

A very short chapter that didn't seem to give any progress to the story just rambling dialogue.

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by HipsterZombie06/26/16

Yeah I've been thinking about cutting it or adding more I just felt that people needed to see Serenadis side, but I'm not really sure how to properly execute it without spoiling some of the plot too early.

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