All Comments on 'Quiet In A Corner'

best poem I have read in some time. Full Moon ritual all the way. I love it!

it was great in the passion thread, but this completes, seems so very Wiccan, I love it!!!

the rhyme is excellent, the subject matter is different that what we usually see on here and your images, well, I can just see you in that corner bending your spoons ;)

I totally love 'Quiet in a Corner', and I am going to be keeping an eye out for anything new you write, as well as reading all that you have posted. I adore your style, very cool.

Brightest of Blessings,

~Shuvani

This poem is stacked with so many quiet little wonders that I almost forgot what it is really about. At least what I think it is about...

My favourite line must be "mayflies of faith".

Bra.

Vo.

Your words:

"Levitating white lies,

mayflies of faith,

flicker through fantasies

here at my folded knees

patiently humming

the rhythm of trees."

create one of the most internally complete and satisfying stanzas that I have read in quite some time. The others aren't bad either!