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by greenmountaineer06/20/16

I'm not well schooled in the art of modern dance, but with a little help from Wikipedia, your words became an incredibly beautiful poem.

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by legerdemer06/20/16

Perfect

Your poem is a perfect snapshot. I really enjoy poetry that alludes to other art forms, and yours has done a truly lovely job of that. Hats off.

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by AMoveableBeast06/29/16

As others have said, this is a terrific poem. Simple and beautiful, delicate and frail as a moment, dazzling and as dizzying as a pirouette. Pound cake poetry.

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