All Comments on 'Window Undressing'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
refreshing

thanks Daddyowill,

nice story, all the characters were having fun without resorting to someone being degraded and humiliated which seems to be rampant in a lot of stories here. Your story was about about people who enjoy sex for the wonderful thing it is. keep up the good work!

tim4522tim4522almost 15 years ago
Ditto Refreshing

Thanks Daddy .. Love your writing style and this story. It seemed so true to life and just how people react, so I echo the last writer's comments. Also, I loved it that all of your guys wore condoms; another realistic part of your story. In addition, I've been trying to get my wife to participate in swinging, so I fantasize whenever I read a story of swinging with her .. So you get 5 stars from me my friend. Keep up the EXCELLENT work. Regards ..Tim

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Too much talk about condoms

Condoms might be sensible in real life, but they're a turn-off in an erotic story. It'd be better if they just weren't mentioned

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Cute

So damn cute. "We'll be happy to cum over for dinner." Was this written by a twelve year old?

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