This is just a cruel tease. I'm sure that you can write a longer, more satisfying chapter.
I thought the bit of humor at the end was cute. A little more interaction with mother and son would have been nice. but, all in all ... a good story...
Totally clinical. There is absolutely no erotica in the story. You might as well describe an enema by a nurse since neither the son nor the mom were active and conscious participants in the act!
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Far too brief.t
This is just a cruel tease. I'm sure that you can write a longer, more satisfying chapter.
funny
I thought the bit of humor at the end was cute. A little more interaction with mother and son would have been nice. but, all in all ... a good story...
Should be under Non - Erotic
Totally clinical.
There is absolutely no erotica in the story.
You might as well describe an enema by a nurse since neither the son nor the mom were active and conscious participants in the act!
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