I rather enjoyed this vignette and it actually gives more value and sense to the original story. Sure the sex was missing but it did only good to the overall standing, so not everything revolves around sex. If you have a few other planed I'm genuinely looking forward to them, a whole lot more than reading about screwing other cousins or how his mom drug-raped him.
"That First Night" needs to like never end. The Amber story isn't bad though I don't really see the need for it to be a separate story, it feels like it could work as the next chapter of "That First Night". But the "My Mom, My Kidnapper" story shouldn't exist. At least in the sense that it is part of the continuity of this series. Doesn't mean don't continue it but put it on the back burner compared to the other 2. Make it as a "what if" thing and not "That First Night" canon you know?
Laura mentions that she isn't on birth control yet not soon after that no mention of the fact that he did in fact cum inside her like the day after or even later that same day? My memories fuzzy on when exactly but expecting her to get pregnant alongside Ashley. Birth control isn't 100% anyways so why not? :)
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Better than the abduction thing for sure
I rather enjoyed this vignette and it actually gives more value and sense to the original story. Sure the sex was missing but it did only good to the overall standing, so not everything revolves around sex. If you have a few other planed I'm genuinely looking forward to them, a whole lot more than reading about screwing other cousins or how his mom drug-raped him.
4*
Need so much more of this
"That First Night" needs to like never end. The Amber story isn't bad though I don't really see the need for it to be a separate story, it feels like it could work as the next chapter of "That First Night". But the "My Mom, My Kidnapper" story shouldn't exist. At least in the sense that it is part of the continuity of this series. Doesn't mean don't continue it but put it on the back burner compared to the other 2. Make it as a "what if" thing and not "That First Night" canon you know?
P.S
Laura mentions that she isn't on birth control yet not soon after that no mention of the fact that he did in fact cum inside her like the day after or even later that same day? My memories fuzzy on when exactly but expecting her to get pregnant alongside Ashley. Birth control isn't 100% anyways so why not? :)
7 years older. I missed this the first time
I love the story, but the age difference...Why?
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