I hope you continue this story it really gets me wet.... Keep writing love the storyline and characters so far ;)
Good story awesome build up
Make another part please this is an amazing storyline and the plot is just wonderful keeps building my anticipation great work :)
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Great stuff
I hope you continue this story it really gets me wet.... Keep writing love the storyline and characters so far ;)
Awesome
Good story awesome build up
A+
Make another part please this is an amazing storyline and the plot is just wonderful keeps building my anticipation great work :)
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