All Comments on 'Naked Pizza'

A truly lovely story.

While I appreciate the international setting, the more I read this, the more I was confused. I guess it was the slang that is not used in the states but send internationally. Left me empty.

Brilliant, funny and engaging. The dialog, while quirky, is fantastic -- just like real people talk. One of the best stories because the characters are so real.

Aussie slang if that's any help to you.

Absolutely wonderful. I do not usually comment, but this is a special tale. It is the best translation of love into words I have ever come across!

now THAT was a picture of wonderful intimacy between two long-loving people.

It took me a little to get into it but then the concept blew me away.

The symbolism of removing a layer physically and becoming more vulnerable and real, to match and support your partner, is amazing.

I've never heard of this as a counselling modality but it would be more fun and intimate than many I've tried.

The part which hit me hardest was the raw poetry in:

"Something weird happens and my eyes start to well. My gut clenches a little and my mouth dries. A lonely tear, the first I've seen in many years rolls sneakily out the corner of one eye and down my cheek. I shuffle nervously, putting the drinks down and wipe my face embarrassed and she folds me up in her arms on the couch.

"It's ok, I'll do it for you." She cries quietly and I wipe her tears away with my lips.

The salty truth between us welds our hearts in broken places and she pushes me back on the couch, gathering the blanket around me and straddling me. She hugs me close as we lie there and my cock stirs between us, pressing into her and growing upwards into her wet waiting hole. I fill her and she moves slowly on me, rocking me inside her, enveloping me in her. Her hair is all around my face and she kisses me wherever her lips find skin, my eyes, my nose and finding my mouth her tongue fills me and we are one."

This is so reminescent of events in my own life, my partner is wonderful.

Thanks for your creativity!

Beautiful. Not the type of thing I'd get off to, but hot all the same. A gorgeous story.

Not often you find true prose mastery on an erotica site. The emotional connection was beautiful. The dialogue believable. The seemed like real people, not cardboard cut-out from adolescent fantasy.

I loved this.

First time I've ever read a story on here that so captured my attention I forgot I was on Literotica and didn't even unzip my pants...

That one star rating was a miss-swipe on my mobile device. I thoroughly enjoyed the story, and like that other guy, also forgot I was on Literotica. Solid 4 stars, actually.

Thank you for a great read. Different, touching, curiously real.

Zach.

The dialog was good. But confusing. In the end it was just the two of them. 80 women for him 16 men for her???? But the ugly duckling turning swan. Nice.

Lovely to read real and witty dialogue and feel I was really getting to know two real (and sexy) people!

Brilliantly done

Great story, quite unlike anything else I’ve read on this site!