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It Had to Happen...

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/23/16

OMG how old are you?! And this was NOT romantic.

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by Anonymous06/23/16

A fantasy romance!

Believable! well-written as a dream! good start!

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by Tw0Cr0ws06/23/16

where. is. the. romance?

This reads like an Erotic Coupling category story.
Then we find that even that was all a dream.

So no romance and no sex.

All just an effing wet dream.

What was there was vivid and interesting, but in the end unsatisfying.

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