Razor Ch. 09

Aargh!

The old movie serial "The Perils of Pauline"and its cliff-hanger endings had nothing on you!!

I cannot wait a week till the next chapter. I need it now! Thank you!

ah you've done it again

And there we were almost ready to grab the maraca's and belt out love is in the air.
But alas...
Lying awake in my hospital room
Silas Creek Parkway is my only view
And the doctor just came by
And told me the news
I need a second opinion
I don't believe that it's true
But....At least we've got the the Musketeers ready to charge now , and it looks like it's fixable and finally it's not Mary fixing it.....
But not so simple Simon not being the policeman and jumping to conclusions.....May the Force be with him......
I'm not gifted enough to be a writer or editor so unfortunately just a mere reader who therefore only can comment as an anon , but not an anal...
Thank you so much....

This is getting long winded and quit using '...' so much, you're over using it.

yes, well

your father will always come to the rescue. Once he knows that he is the father..... Can't wait to read the rest of Razor. I can certainly relate to her. Oh, and fuck all those literary geniuses who are criticizing you. Tell them to go pound sand. I really like this story.......

Maybe it's not perfect

But you tell a great story! I hope you fine a way to continue this story line or start one just as wonderful.