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by Anonymous

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by YDD04/07/04

Rewrite!

Dig the pony out of the shit! There is a poem in there somewhere.

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by dreamsweet04/07/04

woo

wow, and there's nothing of yours for me to pick apart, damn...

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by Syndra Lynn04/08/04

I like this

It reminds me of me-especially the reading material. Thank you for this.

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