I couldn't give more than a 3 on this start--it really wasn't very erotic , but I can see how you can do great things with this story line. As far as your writing craft, it's as good as the better authors who post here.
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I couldn't give more than a 3 on this start--it really wasn't very erotic , but I can see how you can do great things with this story line. As far as your writing craft, it's as good as the better authors who post here.
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Back to Camera in the Wall Ch. 01 or
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