The Train Trip

great story

well written. loved the command and control. it's a shame he didn't get to fuck her though.

Incest? Taboo?

Don't think so but things we hear from Northern America might have changed the rules lately!

This should be in the Mature category.

Wrong Catagory

Lovely story but in the wrong catagory.

How the heck can you place it in this Category???????????

This should not be in this category.
You wasted my time.
Can you not follow simple process of using the right cat for the story?

Wrong Category

Nice story, but wrong category. Should be in "Mature".

Same comment as every other one: You aren't bright enough to know what the hell you're doing.

I kept reading, expecting to see how this story could possibly fit in with Incest, or at least Taboo of some kind. The problem, I think, in addition to your stupidity, is that any dipshit can attempt to claim their story is "taboo". And the problem with THAT is that by using that logic, every fucking story on this site could somehow be described as "taboo". In fact, Literotica should probably drop it as a category. If nothing else, it might reduce the amount of time readers waste reading rubbish like this whenever the moron posting it can't get their shit together.

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The drinking age is 18. Not 19.

Cute Read***

Thanks for sharing.

Excellent Story

What a great story...it may have originally been in the "Taboo" section, so what!!! There is no need to abuse someone just because they may have got the section wrong - Epiphany Jones!

quick easy read......what a bunch of rotten people read your material and criticize. not the same as critique.