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amazing literary talent
Look, the story may be sick to the core but it's got a lot of erotic energy in it. Also, the choice of words and her sensuality at the end of the story almost make it seem like a romantic afair. It's one of the best i've read so far. Congratulations and i look forward to reading more stories from you.
Whoa...too bad! Tooo good.
Yeah, I like it. Erotic energy as another said. But I like the fine sense of justice. Too cool for words. A little short, though neatly written and concise.
TKU for the kudos
Thanks. Glad you liked it. Since I first wrote this, I've discovered a rather interesting fringe group specializing in this 'type' of politically incorrect, erotically violent tales and have even started my own site.
If you would like to read more of my stuff, send me an e-mail and I'll send you an invitation to my free website. I would post the URL here, but it isn't permitted.
LOL,
DanK
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