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Great Start
A 5 star tale of a beautiful beginning to a beautiful relationship from a very promising new contributor.
Love to watch and be watched!
What a fun story! Showing off is such a thrill. My wife and I love to find ways to do this too. I would love to share our stories. You can email me at florida_beaches@aol.com
Great story
You need to go back and fix some progression related issues that were distracting. As I read it seemed like positions jumped around and didn't flow.
Instead of listing the future activities delete them and complete them later as full stories.
Connection to National Nude Day?
A good stroke story, but where is the Nude Day connection? I read no mention of Nude Day, nor any nudity intentionally in view of others to embrace the Nude Day philosophy of increased comfort with one's body nude in the presence of other people, naturists or not.
Good theme
Good idea but needs some work. Nude Day connection? Some parts hard to follow and others hard to imagine.
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