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A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 03 Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/24/16

Really

Way to short an lacked enough substance to keep me interested like other chapters

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by Anonymous06/25/16

Love the series

Cant wait for each chapter to arrive, thanks for keeping us entertained

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by singleot06/25/16

nice build up

Hope you have the next part well under way, looking forward to it, as always.

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by Anonymous06/25/16

Out heroine keen to display the toys and another man in the mix. This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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by Anonymous06/27/16

Always arousing and delicious

So much going on, love it, teasing..Loved Natalies quick kiss on Gwen's playground,
always totally enjoyable, keep us guessing, love the girl girl delicious detailed pleasures..Loved the Harold episode, Gwen and Natalie should take Cricket shoe shoe shopping...Wishful thinking..Love all your directions..Hot, hot and hotter!!!

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by Anonymous06/27/16

Just a tease.

I get that you're building up to something good, but I hope the next chapter arrives soon.

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by Anonymous06/27/16

Fantastic !

Likable characters - great story - cannot wait for the next chapter !

Thanks!

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by blondielover4606/27/16

You're killing me!

I absolutely love this story(probably my all time favorite). I love the character development and how real they seem. I realize that good things come to those who wait, but waiting for each new installment is excruciating. Then you leave us with a cliffhanger like this. Might go insane waiting for the next installment. Please keep up the great work!

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by Desireeb107/12/16

So good

One of my fav stories on here. I really wish Tim would get involved with her and Natalie more. Been teasing it out for ages now. Please please upload a new chapter soon!!!

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by Anonymous07/13/16

Let tim get involved with cricket and gwen

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