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by Anonymous

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by Maria239404/07/04

you are a painter

of souls dancing
on pristine, sistine chapel
walls, no doors ever close
when your mind is near
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by YDD04/07/04

Some things should be flamed. . .

And some things should be defenestrated.
Are these more diary notes?
I like "dance a furious Spring"

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by LeBroz02/29/08

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What a vibrant experience, reading this; seeing existence through prismatic lenses.

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by LeBroz03/08/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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