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a moon poem

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by Anonymous

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by YDD04/07/04

a poem ?

Some interesting imagery, but I see little connection between them or much of a central theme to understand

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by Syndra Lynn04/08/04

Wild, vibrant bright!

And fun. I don't get it, but I don't have to! I like it.

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by annaswirls10/11/04

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baby got me scuffin sidewalk wild
strip tappin the blues
warmin blood for the long way home

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by LeBroz12/15/06

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Set it to song and perhaps these lyrics might work.

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by duddle14612/19/06

Luna

Startling images seem to be the order of the day with this marvelous rendering. A quiet mystical strength seems to be present in this work.

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by Amyfriend02/15/07

Very different...

and leaves food for thought..

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